The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, that's excellent! Wonderful story.
Oh, exceptional dialog - really brought the story along. Loved the characterization. Excellent.
Oh, loved this story and I got chilled, too. Sure sign of greatness:)
SO COOL! Marvelous dialogue...I loved this!
Wonderful story--beginning to end
Your mop woman is the angel in disguise?! Every courthouse should have one. Excellent writing, Lynda. Congrats on your EC!
Congratulations on the EC. The dialogue is wonderful. Nice job with the topic.
I love the dialogue and your mop lady's courage in speaking up and showing love to this scared young lawyer. Great writing and a well deserved EC win!
You set the story us so expertly with your opening sentences. Then the "rabbitkeeled over dead" comment was classic. I loved it. The "wouldn't let it go" attitude of the older woman made me smile. I could just see her. :) Then "hypo-whatever" added another smile to this. :) Your ending was gripping.