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A wonderful retelling of a beautiful story! A little more setting and culture would have helped it a bit.
I liked the part where the father's joy and faith grew as he acted on it.
Thank you for writing this.
I always enjoy Biblical fiction. There was a little telling rather than showing, but still a good story.
Always enjoy stories from the Bible. You've motivated me to reread this one tonight. Thanks for the scripture reference at the end.
This was an excellent retelling of the scripture. You definitely brought the characters to life in a way that was very realistic and believable. At first I couldn't see the topic, but then I saw where you fit it in at the end.

Great, great story.
The Scripture retelling was excellent,especially the anguish of the couple. I rejoiced with them for their son's healing.
I loved the retelling of this story. You did a great job, my friend.