The Official Writing Challenge
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ooohhh... this gave me goosebumps! Very interesting.
Wow - very evocative writing. This was engaging and captivating, and an excellent read - love the title too.
Intriguing title. But I am afraid I got a little lost in the understanding. I was brought back a bit at the ending, but sorry--not your fault, I am sure--I didn't comprehend the story...Good writing, though, leaving the reader something to mull over....Helen
Superbly written and very engaging. My eyes were glued to the words.

I feel like there is a lot more to this story than what can be expressed in 750 words. I would like to see it expanded. I was very intrigued by the story, but I have a lot of unanswered questions now.

Excellent writing. Keep up the good work!
This was a very creative take on the topic. It provides much to think about and has a message that's just right.
Very impressive story, Wormwood :) Very deep and outstanding combination of word choice and emotion. A winner in my book.
Wow! this was at the <..>enith of good writing. Very creative and unique and words well chosen. I'm not sure I understood all of it, but enough to keep my interest and to admire the writing! Great job.
It is the little things - like the card - that bring back powerful memories.
Hmmm, this sounds like it might have been written by, nope, I won't say, but I believe it might lead one to a place called Nightfall.

Very good, the intrigue builds.
Very imaginative and engaging, holding the reader captive to the last word.
Very interesting perspective of the future as it may be once the Christians are removed from the world. The light isn't missed until there's nothing left BUT darkness. I hope to never know this kind of "memory".
You're too good! I'd love to see another chapter added to this. I love your writing style and get so caught up in it that I often veered from the story line. As I said, you're too good!
What an excellent, out of the box entry...I loved it.
Wow! This is very interesting and deep! I liked the tone of it and especially the title! Nice job! ^_^
Very clever.I would consider the card and scent as 'evidence'
of the Saviours Presence .....even in the darkest times. Great writing.
Thank you. God Bless.