The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a visual piece - haunting yet full of hope. I was transformed and transported. Wonderful.
I thought this story was fantastic. I got caught up her story, felt betrayed when she was, kept cheering for her until the end. So glad there was a happy reunion.
A wonderful story Deb, full of all the good things that make a fine story. Pain, regret, betrayal, hope and love. Well done.
This needs to be a book, Debbie! What a wonderful story!
The test of a true family... welcoming home the prodigal child. You wrote this so well, and kept me engaged to the end. Excellent.
So beautiful... at the same time.
Well written.
Debbie, this was a very powerful and moving story.Living here in SA I could so identify with the story.I can see your stay here left a deep impression upon you. Bless you,
Wow, this was really good. A different take on the family reunion and a reality, sadly, in many countries. Well-written and kept me reading from start to finish.
What a beautiful and tender story, told exceedingly well! Kudos!
Thanks you masters for your expertise and encouragement that we writers experience from you, right from starting out as beginners.