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06/05/08
This was an awesome piece. I loved experiencing these memories with you:)
Laury
06/05/08
What lovely memories. I felt many of the same emotions when the place I grew up was bulldozed down in the name of progress. You made your piece come alive with descriptive words and phrases--I felt I was there with you. Good job.
06/05/08
Excellent - the memories you share here come across so vividly. I could see this so clearly in my mind. Wonderfully done - and your title is perfect.
Totally wonderful descriptions; totally wonderful story. Super job!
This has great description written in it. Could "see" the home.
06/08/08
Simply lovely especially a house outliving its family-poignant thought.
Wonderful and sad, thanks for sharing these precious memories.