The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, what a sweet and touching story. Caroline KNEW which pet would heal her. Thank you for sharing.
What I enjoyed most, besides the excellent writing was the layer in your story. It wasn't just about the pet-- it was about so much more and that makes a story wonderful!
Incredibly powerful and compelling from beginning to end. Just wonderful.
Love this story. Excellent, I'm thinking one of my favorite this week:)
Healing is exactly the right title for this beautiful story.
A touching story, and well told.
What a beautiful, heart rending story of how God uses animals to bring healing to the hearts of his little ones. I could relate to the little one finally finding comfort during the night. Congrats on your placing too.
Lovely indeed. It makes me wonder if it's a true story. If so, I do hope the healing continued for everyone.
Congrats on your well deserved entry. If this was true, what a touching slice of life. If fiction, brilliant creative writing. Loved that the layers of the story kept going on the entire time. Not just about a pet, a girl, a dying dad, but about mom too. Brilliant and masterful!
I read this last section through tears in my eyes. Beautiful story deserving of EC. I liked how you ended the beginning of the healing, as everything begins to change.
Congratulations on your EC. Wow, what a tear-jerker. Excellent writing. You captured the emotions perfectly.
Congratulations on your EC! Greeat job on this touching story.
Wonderful writing. Solid from start to finish and definitely packed with emotion. A well deserved EC.