The Official Writing Challenge
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How clever! Loved this and had no clue where it was going! Great job!
Well done. This had nice flow to me and a great story too.
This is such fun and rounded up perfectly by the last verse.
I had an image of Uncle Jed being tall and skinny and Aunt Nell being...well, not tall or skinny. A joy to read, keep sharing your creativity.
Such a fun read! I could Nell and Jed and their personalities came through loud and clear. Fun!
This reminded me of the Jack Sprat nursery rhyme, only this was much better. :)

Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. It was a joy to read.
This was a delight to read.
It has such cadence about it, a beat, a rythym that rings sweet to the ear. I do hope all that Uncle did turns the Aunt's attitude around a bit!
This was a fun read. Delightful characters well described with a nice story. Good job!
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. I was thinking of just 'scanning' it but each stanza keeps me glued to the end. Great job!