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This was creative. Good job showing how Dad saves the day.
This is a charming story about families pulling together to overcome hardship, with nice attention to detail. Details I like include:
The doe being downwind of the fox.
The kit grunting, but persevering with his burned paws.
The mother fox looking at the mother deer before acceding to her mate's pragmatism.
The buck not killing, though he could have.
What can I say--I love a happy ending.
This would be a terrific illustrated storybook for teaching children both about nature in the wild as well as the concept of family. Go for it!

You know your stuff, SirWilliam! This is a genuine attention grabber and keeper.