The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/08
Once I figured out (LoL--I think at least) what you were talking about I was able to understand, but until then I felt like my head was going in circles. (Poetry is So Not my thing--sorry.) IF you were saying that ignorance isn't the bliss it's cracked up to be, then I agree. ;)

Did I get it right? LoL
03/10/08
Wow, this poem really hit home with me.I too require God's discipline to grow, and to receive the blessings He has for me. If only I could learn to apply lessons learned from His Word without His nudges.
03/10/08
Thanks for the scripture verse at the end--it lent more meaning to the poem when I thought about the weight of sin vs. Christ's light burden.

I liked this line--"I rebuke the knife
for the toughness of the meat."