The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/08
Sometimes it pays to makes mistakes in the languageor WAS it a mistake at all? Good.
Gripping story!
02/10/08
When I clicked on the title I was expecting something different - something funny. But I'm so glad it was this story instead.

I love the ending - the discussion about the pig herder, especially the line "We do not know you; perhaps we do not even trust you. But we trust the one who walks with you. " Powerful words.
02/10/08
Wonderful. I was gripped and there was no way I was going to stop reading. I love those last lines. Truly wonderful.
From beginning to end you had me hooked. I love stories of missionaries and how the Lord works in their situation. Well told.
02/12/08
Very entertaining. And a creative, interetsing, out of the box read. Nice job. God bless.
02/12/08
Your story is wonderful. Is it based on a true event? I've heard of Bible translations that to English speaking people don't make sense or are comical, but a literal translation wouldn't be understood by the foreign reader. Awesome creativity with this entry.
Wonderful! What a unique take on the subject. I enjoyed this.
This will not be forgotten for sometime. Thanks for touching my heart with this turn of a phrase. Keep writing!