The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Powerful and very visual.
Very powerful, very well-done. This would be great, performed by a youth group. Super!
Chilling and thought provoking. Yeah, I think this would be a good youth group skit. Good writing.
I really like making this a script. It's very effective for this message. -I'd love to see it performed.
Chilling is the right word for this! The end where Jackis is saying she can't be dead-wow. that certainly adds a new twist to this piece. I liked how you did the script format and it was surprising to see how everyone's view of Jackie was so very different. Nice job! ^_^
The title is wonderful and the story played out like something from the Twilight Zone. Keep up the good words.
The title really makes this story. Very well crafted and you brought the topic home.