The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent message. Unfortunately, this stuff really happens. It's too bad young people don't understand their porpularity in school doesn't mean diddly in the real world. Great job.
So much to consider here - glittery crown, glittery friends, glittery illusions of happiness. Sad that she even knew it was worthless - but let herself pursue it anyway, not questioning "why not". Like the last paragraph.
Very, very realistic - great job with the dialog and characterization and the "cattiness" of these years. This one stabbed me. Wonderful.
Great story of achieving a desired end that seemed full of promise, but ended up an empty victory.