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It's frightening to think that it may someday come to this... your ending is powerful and brings your story to a strong conclusion.
A great reminder to stay strong in the "good" times.
12/07/07
Powerful story, characterization, setting, ambiance - EVERYTHING. This is masterfully done in every way. Wow.
12/07/07
This story really drew me in and kept me reading to see how the characters would react. Powerful imagery and characters.
12/09/07
Yes. Good job. It's scary, but I can see America sliding in this direction. The awesome thing is that in countries where this IS happening... the gospel is spreading like wildfire. God is indeed bigger than the boogyman.
You kept my attention throughout. I was struck by the woman's resolve as she faced the inevitable. Powerful!
12/10/07
Absolutely chilling!
12/10/07
The scary thing is that this could happen! Great portrayal of the characters--hearing Lydia's thoughts really put us in the moment, and it broke up the happenings. You made us think, too--good job.
This was realistically frightening. May God have mercy on our nation.
At risk of being redundant... Powerful! I love the connection between the holocaust and the present, through Lydia's husband,all within a woman's lifetime. This is a sober warning that we get the government we deserve by our own choice. I can only pray that I would be able to take such a stand.