The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Beautiful imagery - and I love the structure of this. Much to enjoy here - and ponder.
12/07/07
Beautiful word pictures. I like the repetition at the end of each stanza pulling together what happens in a home group.
This holds so many truths; you've said a lot in not too many words. Very nicely done.
When it comes to home groups, I don't think you left one stone unturned! I especially like the second line of each stanza.
Beautifully creative and well crafted
12/12/07
RED PEN: A poem!
You kept each stanza within its own theme.
I could see the pattern, but I with a little work, each line could have a pattern.
1. 2 verbs
2. phrase about kingdom
3. noun phrase
4. adjective phrase
etc.
I liked this part:
"Blurring the line
Between yours and mine"
I like the last lines. They showed the whole reason for the home group.
Very descriptive and full of truth. Well done.
12/17/07
loved this one.. GREAT description of saints getting together...