The Official Writing Challenge
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Felt like I was right there - amazingly vivid descriptions. Perhaps a TOUCH off topic, but still a blessing.
Oh for more people who would just do one good thing. Well done.
The power of one good thing should never be underestimated. I liked the hope in this story and the inspiration that sticks with you all the way through. Details like the stained glass windows, white clapboard and the mud daubers made this more realistic. ^_^ Nice job!
Your writing is so 'real', and it's a pleasure to get lost in your stories. This one is excellent, if not about a 'home' group. You've shown the difference one person can make.