The Official Writing Challenge
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This wonderfully constructed poem is powerful in beauty, in message, in conviction.
11/08/07
You've done a great job of expressing an important message. One of our realities in church planting is the length of time it take to build relationships before we can "earn" the right to be heard. The relationship often paves the way for the words. Well done.
11/08/07
Beautifully written! This is so true (about using words that the "unchurched" don't understand). Great lessons/reminders. I like your format too.
11/09/07
Perfect. I wrote a prose entry that says the same thing, but I like this much better. Just...perfect!
11/12/07
This is really good. Simple. Great message. Excellent writing.
11/14/07
A brilliant string of His words.
11/14/07
A vital reminder that we reach out in true love and concern. Wonderfully expressed!
11/14/07
The cost to disciple is often overlooked in the rush to evangelize and then leave. Your poem brought your message through loud and clear, and it needs to be heard.
Wow. This sums up everything on this topic this week. It's something I think that I tend to do, thanks for the reminder to watch the string of words and instead listen to the small voice.
11/15/07
Congratulations on your much deserved EC. Great job.
The beauty and the meaningful crafting of the poem leave me speechless. The power in the rhythm you chose is incredible. Great work.
Congratulations on the EC and the affirmation therein.
Profound! Blessed to have read this...