The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
Very, VERY vivid descriptions. This was so moving and stunning.
10/27/07
You have painted lovely images in your portrayal of this lonely woman leading up to her changed heart.
10/27/07
I loved this - the imagery is amazing. Wonderful picture of problems that can arise witin the church.
You have wonderful imagery in this story of how God shows us our hearts in the need for forgiveness.
10/29/07
It is so amazing how the mountaintop experiences of our faith walk can become small in our eyes as we walk along in our life circumstances. I love this story, because it is one that almost any believer can relate to if he or she is honest. Incredible, thought-provoking piece.
This is a very creative story. Excellent writing. Bravo.
This is so incredibly real. I feel as if I were standing just beside her, seeing, hearing and feeling her pain and being unable to do anything but rejoice when she finally 'returns'. A beautiful, blessed story. Gave me goosebumps-especially with your descriptions of the jeweled sunshine and the stained glass window. Wonderful writing! ^_^
10/30/07
Wow--how on earth did you come up with such a moving and original idea! Probably the most moving piece I've read on this topic.