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Just lovely! I so enjoyed this little "slice of life." You definitely have a way with dialog and description. Love your women - every one of them!
Sounds just like a group of friends heading to a retreat! Very good dialogue and descriptions; I could almost see the rain pouring down outside the van.
I want to go on a retreat with these gals. They sound like fun. This is well written.
Hi: I really enjoyed your depiction of fellowship with some women on retreat. Having just been on one myself your observations refreshed the encouragements we too received. We really do need each other.