The Official Writing Challenge
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I love your dexcription of the music in the sixth paragraph. Makes me long to hear it!
Isn't it so hard to describe the indescribable? And yet you have done an awesome job in your human endeavor. Good work!
Just amazingly vivid and worshipful and lovely. Makes me even more eager to be in His presence.
The vision you offer is so lovely I almost missed the great storytelling that made it real for me. Beautifully written.
Auper and inspiring read for a Sunday morning. God bless.
A super ... :)
What an amazing picture. Loved the line about the throne glowing.
I love your descriptions. I felt like I was standing right next to the woman with the crow voice. :)

Nice writing, and very good job with the topic.
The writing is amazing. Love the vivid descriptions.
Beautiful. I want to be there. I enjoyed this very much.
Very creative descriptions in your writing. Good job.
Breathtaking! Your descriptions are so poetically beautiful and powerful. Awesome piece!