The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the culture shown in this story. I found the ending to be lacking a bit in a conclusion, but otherwise I enjoyed this!
I visited a place in China today, thanks to your vivid descriptions! Well written and enjoyable story about a place that I previously had never heard of. A little more, please!
Extremely vivid and engaging. Thank you for taking me on this journey. :)
Interesting, well-written piece. I agree with the others. I would like to read more about this place, and learn what became of Drew and his plan to modernize the province.