The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful job of getting us inside your MC's head. Your detail is super too. Good stuff!
Enjoyed this little intrigue. Good title.
Chocolate, romance, a voice from heaven, and boldness-- all wrapped up with a wonderful writing talent...who could ask for anything more?
This is fun, and written with the just the right touch of humor. This is my favortie line:
"A buzzing sound gets my attention, and through the smoking wick, I see my phone spinning around on the floor like a bug trapped on its back."
Great description. Well done.
Bread and Chocolate Deli -- Did you make this place up and if not, where is it? My two favorite things! Very nice writing!
Oooo, just the title sucked me in and the story didn't disappoint. Great job!
I loved this one also... Really great writing and so relateable! We've all been there for sure.. and I love how she got confident at the end, just from his attention. I did have to laugh at the wrinkles at 27? Sorry, but it made me feel older than I want to! :)
Lovely story. Easy to read.
Super! Am I mistaken, or is this more light-hearted than your usual? I like it!
Your descriptions are so unique and visual. The earthworm sidewalk cracks and the telephone spinning like a bug on its back made me smile. A sweet romantic story.