The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooooooh, I like how you did this. A great twist.
This was great - totally riveting.
So vivid and wonderfully descriptive. Much to ponder.
Interesting take on choosing life.
This just the kind of story I like to read. A bit of mystery, good dialogue, and a surprise at the end. It's a very good entry!
You have a good description of a spiritual battle. I liked your use of "enemy" at the beginning, then with the choice between the two men. Good story and good writing.
Wow! This is extremely well done. You don't overdo the descriptions, but I can see everything as if I'm there. And your concept is great. Congratulations on your EC!
Sandy congrats on the EC! This is an awesome story! You had me sitting on the edge of my seat until the very last word. Excellent! Time to write a book...
Congrats on making EC. I thought I had already commented on this story (I did read it and loved it) but I must have been holding a squirming baby when I read it and wasn't able to type. Anyway, better late than never: GREAT! The descripitons and images were so vivid and real. Wow. You are a master.
Wonderfully written.
Congratulations on your EC. This is a very creative story, with such a powerful message. Good job.