The Official Writing Challenge
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Your poem is "cute as a bug."
07/26/07
Cute poem! Noses are so "right out there" on our face for all to see..... If someone's not happy with theirs, they have to "face it" every day. Thanks for sharing the laugh!
07/26/07
LOL! I KNEW this would be a fun week to read. Clever reasoning. I'm going to use that on my next Diet club report: My nose made me do it! Very funny!
07/26/07
Love it!
Loved your wit. Your Nose Woes should win a rose before she blows. **sorry... but you tickled my funny bone and now I am out of control...**
07/27/07
Just delightful and fun! Love every stanza.
07/27/07
Your poor nose! To be so unappreciated and in verse too! I think that the rhyming sequence was very ambitious. For me some of the word choices were perhaps a little forced at times or too obvious
:-)... Too funny!!!
What a creative way to demonstrate something so funny...I think it's been said that God, putting our noses where they are, shows that He has a sense of humor!
Really cute! I loved, as do all your readers, the wonderful lilting rhyme and rhythm. What a fun treat!
08/02/07
How cute. And your rhyme scheme and rhythm fit the topic of your poem so well. For someone who doesn't write a lot of poetry, you sure do a good job with it. :)