The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love a good senior citizen's story. I actually wrote an alternate story that I didn't enter about a senior who was going to a bingo game and got stopped by a policeman. Great minds, and all that, huh? Good action in this piece. It's a keeper.
Hilarious! Well done.
One exciting ride! Whew! Hope this is not what I'm looking forward to!
Loads of fun! And your last line is precious and perfect. Fun stuff, my friend!
It just goes to show that no matter your age you can find trouble. :) I felt like I was riding along with them. Your adventure is entertaining.
ROFL! What a joyride indeed. That Henry must have been a world-class mischeif maker in his younger years. ^_^ A delightful read, especially seeing from an older POV. I loved Dorothy's ongoing thoughts though. Very nice.
What a cute story. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. Good writing.