The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07 we think we have things under control when the reverse is the case! Ultimately, it's God who's got it all in His hands. I like this.
I really liked the different perspectives and, of course, the final authority's perspective. This is excellent. Good job.
I like the theme carried through each setting. Intriguing story and concept.
A fascinating story! Great message!
Intriguing and thought provoking! LOVE the ending. Great job.
This is suspenseful! I love the secret-agent POV in the first place, especially the action bit. Very nice. My only note is in the first paragraph you said the two agents "broke out of the car" Did they literally break? Or is it just being me, reading things backwards? ^_^ Otherwise, very well done, I especially liked the last POV. Everything is under control, eh?
One of the best this week for being spot-on topic--I felt breathless just reading it! And the kicker was awesome.
Your repetition is so extremely effective here. This is excellent.
Wow! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. Great!
I enjoyed the many facets of this story, and especially the "under control" message that ran through each of them. Excellent writing.