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Great take on Joseph's story. I loved the last line: "Her plan was infallible" except for God. Good work.
Just excellent. This story was so engaging from beginning to end. I loved this take on Joseph's "fleeing."
You made the whole sordid event come to life. Very well done.
What a masterful and imaginative retelling of the story of the attempted seduction of Joseph by Potiphar's wife! Your descriptive words and phrases were excellent, and one of my favorites was "He jumped away from her as if from a crackling fire." Great imagery! :)
I love this! I love how you capture the manipulative nature of this woman. Sometimes I wonder if she was alive to witness Joseph's rise to power next to Pharoah and what she thought then...
I love that you repeat "Her plan was infallible". It made me laugh. Foolish woman.

This was very well written and I enjoyed it.
This was a great presentation of the temptation of Joseph from Nefertari's view. I think you did an excellent job of showing her as she was.