The Official Writing Challenge
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I can almost hear the film noir music playing in the poem!
Well done. The message is great and presented with wonderful style.
Thank you. Good.
Excellent. Full of insight and wisdom and good teaching.
Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! A couple of typos, but nothing distracing. Great job on this entry!
Wow. I wish you could teach me how to right like that.
This is a nice read at the end of a very long week. Nice ryhme and flow and especially a good story and message interwoven.
I really love this--what a great message in a wonderful poem. A "master"ful poem for sure!
How do you do it? Such a long poem, but right on target. I would run out of thought and words.
Superb skill, and nothing short of brilliant. I hope you encounter readers who can recognize the caliber of your talent. I salute you, sincerely.
Kenn - fun story. I stumbled on the meter at times, which is due to my own non-rhythmic limitations. Very enjoyable.