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Cute title, and very realistic writing of a young child's thoughts and words. Sweet story!
Very cute story. Delightful voice!
Adorable! A perfect children's mystery with realistic characters and behavior. Excellent work and a great title too.
This an adorable story! I love the inner dialouge and espeically dear Gracie. She's a miniature sherlock in the making. Especially like the bit with the story from the woman and the missing coin. ^_^
I loved the story--best of all--the child's faith.
Whining will get you in the naughty spot. Don't I know it! God doesn't like whiners. I loved that line.

You did a beautiful job of capturing the innocence and not-so-innocence of childhood with this 'mystery' of Gracie Jane's. Nice work.

Blessings, Cheri
Cute! And you even brought Jesus into this crime solving.
Precious, delightful and an all around great story!
What an absolutely wonderful job of characterization on Gracie Jane. This story was absolutely delightful.
What a wonderful job of writing from a little girl's POV! I like the part about the "angry monster" - I'm familiar with it too. :)
The Finder-Outer, that is classic. This was a fun read and very well done. I could see this as a pre Nancy Drew series for a younger set, like my sleuthing kids!