The Official Writing Challenge
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I don't know how planes stay up in the air, but I BELIEVE! Appreciated this one. Good work.
Oh this was good! I liked the character of Tommy, very loveable and easy to relate to. Not quite as 'mysterious' as I was hoping for, but I like the encounter with the angel. ^_^
Great story for a Sunday School handout. Check into your denomination's curriculum, perhaps?
Amen to the story - God is GOOD. And amen to the previous comment - I'd like a copy myself. This was great.

Thanks, and God bless,

You did an exceptional job of portraying Tommy's mind renewal. I was captivated from beginning to end!
Good job. I've said that on so many mysteries this week! I'm sure glad I wasn't judging. Good writing here.
This was priceless! God is awesome, and He knows how to bring in His wayward children, at all ages! Blessings, Cheri
A great story of a boy's discovery of faith. I like what a "real" little boy he was.
Rushed. More emphasis needed on the boy's experience between good and evil, I felt, and less words spent on the lead up. 750 words is a tight jacket, but needs some editing. Good material, however.