The Official Writing Challenge
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Good mystery, though I'm still a bit confused as to who was who, but I did get that she figured it out in the end. Nice job with the flashback.
Great ending...I'll bet there are a lot of families with similar stories.
Good job. intriguing and tantalizing.
Very intriguing. I loved this phrase: "The conversation became a dance, quickly landing, then jumping and turning, never standing still for closer examination." So it was grandfather's son, right? Very sly! Great job!
I enjoyed reading this story. I especially liked the description of conversation--already mentioned in the comments. As I approached the end of the story, with not many words left, I was afraid I wouldn't find out the solution to the mystery. Good job!
I wonder if I know whose this is :) Great description and intrigue/detail. I was engaged from beginning to end!
What's behind the closet door? Good mystery here. And I liked the solution.
Family secrets are there. I love the way you discovered the answer, in Jesus' Name, Patricia.