The Official Writing Challenge
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This story certainly set a homey, comfortable mood. I've seen saw paintings before, and they are wonderful. Well done.
I liked the moment in which the MC realizes what a gift it is to have a heritage and a connection to family. I liked how this story started in one place and led to another.
This was beautifully and cleverly done. I kept waiting to see where crafts would fit into the story but it finally did. I loved it!
You created a nice moment. Very nicely done. Enjoyed this. God bless.
A vivid mountain view you painted for us here! I love your last line. Nice job.
Lovely slice of life.
Good job. I was taken in by the words: "headed into a tiny little town that really didnt care what the rest of the world did". It put me right into the setting.
Good job with the "you are there" aspect of this piece!