The Official Writing Challenge
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What a neat poem. I enjoyed reading it.
This is so touching. The ending is just precious. Even made me sniffle a little. Very well done.
Very precious, Jan! So much tenderness is expressed here, in Grandpa's change of heart. Love it.
This is a very tender, well-written poem. What a fortunate child to be so "prized" by his grandfather.
This is really sweet -- and so enjoyable to read. I admire people who can write beautiful poetry -- what a gift.
This was so nice!! Makes me choke upp and I like the hat idea too!! So many personal details - that made it even better!
A childs dream realized - can't get much better than that! Great job.
What a beautiful poem. This would be a good "filler poem" for father's day in a slick magazine. Good job.
A touching, beautifully written poem. I really liked it.
So sweet and beautifully written. ^_^
As a fisherman and a grandpa I found this poem emotionally warming. Well written, great ending.