The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/07
We all have things beneath the murky water that needs a closer look. Thanks to Jesus, we can all be a "keeper." I enjoyed your story! Blessings, Jo
02/09/07
Wonderful vivid detail - loved your descriptive words.
02/09/07
Thought-provoking story with a good message! I also liked your descriptive phrases, such as, "His mind was casting its own bait into dark pools of memory, pulling back pungent visions" and "Wasted years swam just beneath the surface, beckoning with mysterious ripples." Good job! :)
02/12/07
This story "hooked" me from the beginning. The intrigue about this man and his life kept building. But I wanted him to finish his dream -- I hate interupted dreams. Very nicely written.
02/15/07
Creative concept. Great story telling. God bless.