The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting! I especially loved the professor's quote: "Your life is unwritten, make every word count." That's simultaneously a sobering and an exciting thought!
Great reminder! This isn't about us!
Love the way you tied this all together in the beginning and end, and the dream sequence was SO visual. A fabulous reminder.
WoW! I loved your beginning and your ending. You did such a great job detailing Sydney's enlightenment and renewed passion and purpose, which of course, are essential to great writing.
Yes! I love that dream. I wish you could've given the reader more action earlier in the piece. It began a little slow for me, but then POW! - a wonderful surprise.