The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. How true. Every word we write or utter has an impact, for good or bad. Yes we are told we will give an annount on that day. I'm sure you join with me in prayer that something we have written or said has brought forth fruit, golden fruit. Loved this piece.
Very deep and meaty and beautiful - thanks for the late night dinner :)
So, so much to think on here - and much to learn. This was fascinating to me, and begs to be read numerous times.
There is so much to absorb here. Your content is well-develped and stated. In my humble opinion however, it seems more like prose than poetry (even though your choice of words is poetic). For that reason, I found the lack of punctuation and the capitalization at the beginning of each line a bit distracting in this particular piece. It certainly does not detract from your creativity and the overall content, though. Your writing is superb!
Deep, indeed. I would have preferred this to be more concise, highlighting the gems throughout. Very creative thoughts on judgment. This piece fascinates me.