The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful. God bless.
Magnificent! I read each paragraph with increasing joy and awe--and the last one was simply astounding. Wonderful title, too.
Wow. This is awesome. So creative and beautiful. I hope it places in the EC!
I read this three times to let it sink in!

Awesome description:

"When it was over; when the earth had shuddered and the skies had screamed, Eliyahu discovered that all music was lost. Heaven was silent. A mute alien had entered; had visited every corner. Her name was Pain."

Amazingly vivid and poetic. You used the music to a perfect effect throughout. I feel like I can't compliment this properly - as it deserves - but know I am completely in awe.
Wow ... I felt as if I could actually HEAR the images in this masterful story. Well done! Bravissima! Thanks for sharing it
There you go, writing above the master category again!!! Do you know how hard it is to judge that!!! LOL I absolutely love this Helen. You rock!!