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I love this story,encourages us to keep the Cross in view,by the life we live, so those who don't believe might be drawn to the Cross.
This is very good! Gently witty, and the narrator's genuine concern for Susan is highly evident. I'm particularly taken by the conversational voice, and by the lovely brief prayer at the end.
Love the conversational tone of this, and the message. What a perfect analogy of the avoider of Christ! Thank you!
Excellent story with a terrific message and believable characters.
Nice progression here with insertions of satire and reality. Good commentary on relationships, belief, and the God behind it all. :-)

I loved this line - Perhaps one day, if she sees those crosses often enough, Susan will actually see beyond the object to the objective. Brillant!