The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/14
Lots of attitude in this one. Clever and humorous. Thanks for sharing.
What a lively, lovely romp! Very well written.

Only a smidgen of red ink - a sixteen year old gal having a twenty four year old mother? A wee bit of explaining will help to not distract this old gal from the delightful flow of this piece ...
02/04/14
A very different approach to the topic at hand. Nicely done.

God bless~
Quite a saga, and worth a chuckle. Yes, the 24/16 problem, also be careful of name spellings - e.g. Felicia/Felecia. Details that make a difference. But good. God bless you.
02/06/14
Congrats on your 1st place entry! Keep up the great work.
I'm so sorry I didn't read this earlier. I thought I had read all the ones in Masters. I'm glad I noticed it though because it was wonderful. You captured the voice of a petulant teen girl perfectly. You were spot on topic and the change was gradual enough to feel real. Congratulations!
02/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~