The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/09
Ha Ha! Love this. Love the ending, especially.
This is fun...love it!
08/03/09
Loved it, especially the "golden locks."
Oh I liked this! I was tapping my fingers on my desk as I was reading it and found it such a delightful and fun read! Great job!!!
This is wonderful, Bryan. I agree, it would make a great kids' picture book. Very clever last two lines. Well done!!
08/05/09
Very fun and cute. Love the jaunty rhyme. And golden locks??? Oh man...Clever! I wish I would have written that! :)
08/05/09
Now that was clever!
heehee, cute and clever! love the wordplay at the end.
Clever and fun and the last line had a tongue-in-cheek- wittiness about it. And, once reading it, the title could not be more perfect.
Creative and fun with the best line saved for last!
08/05/09
Delightful! Made me chuckle at the end... :)
08/05/09
Bryan, how do you think this stuff up? It is so good. I laughed out loud and had to read it to Bill.
Mona