The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/08
I like that you ended on a note of hope, but didn't feel the need to tie everything together in a neat package. Well done.
I like this story, it is realistic of how many children live today and the hope of Jesus if someone outside the home can make that influence. Nice message too.
~Ree~
Poor Lauren! I'm glad that she had Melinda to help and talk to. This was sad, but good. ^_^