The Official Writing Challenge
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I was taken in by your title and was not disappointed by your story. I could hear the wind right along with you. What a special child to hear God's symphony playing in nature.
I loved the descriptions here. I found myself wishing I knew more about when and where this was taking place, but then a little mystery is ok,too. Nice job!
03/16/07
I can almost feel the breeze now. The descriptions, the relationship between mother and daughter, this was a very sweet read.
What a wonderful memory to help in the sad times! Children are truly God's blessings. Some are returned to God much to early for us. But, thankfully, God left a benefit in this heartwarming memory.
Way to go! This was so nice to see that you and your article placed. Congratulations.
03/27/07
Just wanted you to know as a judge for Music I loved your entry. I not only scored you high enough to win level three, but third over all in the E.C. Be encouraged, and keep up the good work. God bless.