The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/06
This story, so well written, had the sound of reality and left me wondering, is it true? If so, Kendi, I wanted to hear more. Nothing is more tragic or touching than the news of an abandoned child.
11/27/06
The drama and realism touched me. This is very well written, I hope it rates well.
11/27/06
This felt so raw and real. Excellent description and characterization. I also want to know more - especially if this is true, and even if it isn't!
11/28/06
Very honest and real writing!! Great reader involvment. You had me from start to finish. Excellent job. God bless.
11/28/06
We can't even imagine, can we! My heart goes out to all the Nasha's in the world - Lord give us eyes to see them and understand their hurt and pain.
11/28/06
Beautifully written!
12/01/06
I'm so glad I came "looking" for you, to thank you for your sweet comment on my "parent" entry. This is such a gripping piece of writing. It sounds so real. If it is fiction, you have one awesomely creative imagination. If it is fact, are you Sister Catherine, Kendi, or the adoptive parent?