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03/07/05
Very cute and creative! Summed up nicely at the end with a clever cheer. This one made me smile...
Great job.
Lynda
03/08/05
Very clever ! I love the idea that there might have been cheerleaders all the way back then! (Wonder what they wore?)
03/09/05
Bringing the modern and the ancient together to show it's the same now as then. If we remain faithful to God He will work wonders for us. Very innovative.
03/09/05
O_o

Points for creativity. I liked "Girgland." Zizzonex wins an award for the wildest name ever...it's a good one, but I couldn't help thinking about "over-the-counter medication" every time I read it...lol.

A good read, thanks for posting.
This had my imagination going as I was thinking their ultimate battle plan would be a sneak attack, getting someone as a counter spy in there to slowly poison them and introduce an idol they couldn't refuse!

Which is kinda what happened to them time and time again.

Fun read
03/10/05
Very clever! Fun to read.
03/10/05
You had the Perizzites, Hivites,Amorites..but you forgot the Parasites!!!
03/11/05
Often great lessons can be better learned when posed in the arena of humor. Such is the case in this piece. I have been felled by many different 'ites' over the years. Perhaps if I had this closing cheer, back then, there might have been more victories. A nicely balanced read; peppered with just enough wit so as not to loose its flavor: a message needing to be savored. My respect! - Nancy
03/13/05

Excellent. I love your writing style.

Kathy