The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/06
This really spoke to my heart. As I read, I walked the hills and valleys and ended up on the mountain top!

"enter His gates with thankful hearts
come into His courts … splendiferous

the way foretold, Messiah revealed
walk the path … rapturous "
This was an amazing piece to read. Thank you so much for sharing.
08/01/06
I recently completed a Bible study on the Tabernacle, and this poem is a marvelous campanion to that study. You've captured the wonder of the Tabernacle, and with wordplay that I really appreciate.
08/01/06
I really liked your creative style. There are many lovely phrases: "cloudy day and fire by night." "...calls mankind to abundant love...most gracious." A very deep piece of writing. Well done.
08/03/06
Wow! Jan, this is an absolute lovely journey "walk". To come up with so many beautiful "ous" words equals STUPENDOUS! From poet to another, you rock! You should be proud of this one. Blessings abundant Brenda.