The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful story, you packed so much into 750 words. I didn't want it to end, but it ended perfectly. WOW! WOW! WOW! Master story telling!!
Oh this was lovely! The progression through his life was perfect. Your detail was pieced in beautifully. I can tell you took much care in writing this so it would all come together as well as it did!
I can tell you put your heart into this story. Terrific writing, simply terrific.
Oh, how lovely! I love everything about this piece--the voice, the progression through his life, the movement--everything is wonderful.
This story brought me through the gamut of emotions, and it was a WONDERFUL ride! Thanks so much for this!
Everything about this is WOW! WOW! WOW! Loved it!
An very enjoyable story. You have a great voice and a talent for arranging words. "But like dad said, pilots don't walk, so I went back to flying." Very well done.
Congratulations Lynda!
Lynda, dear friend, what a wonderful story! Every little tidbit is simply delicious, not the least of which is the perfect Scripture underpinning the entire piece. If this is based on a true story, you have certainly done it justice. If it is fiction, wow! what an imagination and a talent for illustrating God's Word with gripping storytelling ability. Another one for my "favorites!" Oh, and Congratulations on a well-deserved recognition!
Congratulations, Lynda! I just reveled in the beautifully drawn details as you progressed through his life. My dad is a retired preacher, so I had some misty moments at the end. You hit the heart with this one--a well-deserved win!
Oh, how beautiful! I'm ashamed how slow I was to catch on with where you were going. Beautiful, touching, and a very well-deserved win. COngrats (belated)