The Official Writing Challenge
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A good story with a great message - I just have one problem. As a firearms afficionado I must point out that revolvers don't have a place where one can "screw on" a supressor (not silencer). Other than that, like I said, it was a great story. Thanks for sharing.

God bless,

Kevin
07/28/06
Great story, well told!
08/02/06
Sounds like it could be expanded into a book, great story!