The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay, this exotic story cries "excerpt" from a dramatic novel. I see all sorts of possibilities for expanding this (flashback chapters detailing the source and travels of the treasure, little boys playing on top of what they know not, unique characters and their life stories to develop). You have all the hints here in this capsule. Get busy on that book I want to read! Oh, and keep the title!
An excellent take on this parable. Great to see the stories of Jesus boing retold, with all thier original potency.
What a creative piece to come out of a simple parable told by our Lord. It got bogged down during the long, complicated letter - but I was intrigued enough to keep reading to see how the "Hat Tasted". (Smile) Really great story and written very well.