The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
Do you ever know how to tell a story! Such a natural (not forced) dialog that gets to the point without being obvious. Thank you for the little side trip to the bus station! I felt like I stood there, eavesdropping on the conversation.
06/12/06
My favorite part of this is the grandmother praying at the beginning--it just really resonated with me. Thanks for this touching story!
This is such a powerful message and so well written. I really enjoyed it. Thanks.
06/13/06
The power of prayer is evident. Nicely done with a good ending.
06/14/06
Beautiful story! Well written!