The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the concept of this poem and the shift from "As a new believer" to "As God". There are several other technical aspects, however, that need work, but since I reject every attempt to write poetry myself, I'm hardly the one to criticize! Thanks for the message.
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Very good poem - by the way!

Teresa Rainey
Ladybug Karen,
I'm a terrible critic of poetry, as I never write it myself. But I know what I like, and I like this.
Very nicely done!