The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! You really got me on this one! I had no idea how this was going to end! Yikes! Great job! A Davey for this one for sure!
I'm sitting here overwhelmed! What a beautiful picture of peace with the least expected ending! Awesome!
WOw! You got me for sure. Very good twist. Never saw it coming.
This is absolutely masterful. I'm in awe.
What can anyone say but, WOW. You had me all the way to the end. And what an end. Awesome job.
Incredibly good job with the twist at the end. Wow. Well, well, well done.
What a truly beautiful picture! Of course I had to read it more than once! Great job!
Teri, I am in awe! My face is still wet with emotion and my heart skipped a beat, twice I think. WOW!! This has got to place or I fear my heart will skip another beat.

Great job! May the Lord continue to guide your pen.

Oh my word, this is BRILLIANT! I was so caught up in how perfectly you were describing everything, with just enough detail to create the scene around me, but without the overkill (pardon the pun). And then - WHAM! That ending!!! I had to read the whole thing again. BRILLIANT!!!
Okay, I had to read it again. I'm just so impressed with the surprise ending. So rarely is there a Challenge entry with a surprise ending that's truly a surprise. I think every single FW member and everyone else who reads this should stand and applaud.
Teri, beautiful, absolutely beautiful. A masterpiece written with the touch of the Master's hand.